Saturday, November 1, 2008

Broadcast Project Script

(ANCHOR ON CAM)

IT'S STRESSFUL ENOUGH WORRYING ABOUT KEEPING YOUR JOB IN TODAY'S ECONOMY BUT WHAT IF YOU HAD TO WORRY ABOUT KEEPING YOUR RESIDENCY IN THE UNITED STATES TOO...AS SCARY AS IT SOUNDS, MANY WORKERS HERE ON A VISA HAVE TO DEAL WITH THIS ISSUE EVERY YEAR.

LUCKILY, AN INFORMATIONAL CONFERENCE ON IMMIGRATION WAS HELD BY LAW ATTORNEY DAVID ZARIT-SKEE BROWN AT THE CISCO BUILDING IN SAN JOSE ON OCTOBER 29. ONLY ONE GUEST WAS FROM CISCO, THE REST FROM VARIOUS COMPANIES THROUGHOUT THE BAY AREA. MOST WERE MEMBERS OF A VIRTUAL NON PROFIT ORGANIZATION FOR CANADIANS WORKING IN THE BAY AREA. ONE MEMBER, HEATHER LAWLER, SAID THAT SHE ATTENDS THE CONFERENCE EVERY YEAR AND FINDS IT VERY HELPFUL.

ATTORNEY BROWN ADDRESSED VARIOUS TOPICS ABOUT THE IMMIGRATION PROCESS AND GAVE SPECIFIC TIPS AND STRATEGIES TO GETTING AROUND THE ISSUES. OVERALL, GUESTS FOUND THE CONFERENCE INFORMATIONAL AND HELPFUL...FOR THOSE OF YOU AT HOME INTERESTED IN ATTENDING NEXT YEAR OR RECEIVING MORE INFORMATION YOU CAN VISIT DIGITAL MOOSE LOUNGE DOT COM OR EMAIL ATTORNEY BROWN AT DEE BROWN AT BROWN IMMIGRATION LAW DOT COM. 

1 comment:

camccune said...

Good story. Good lead, but split that sentence in half. It's too long.

Also, since this is for broadcast, write it in present tense as if it were going to be aired on the day it happened.

You need to include a pronunciation guide for ZARIT-SKEE
...AT BROWN-IMMIGRATION-LAW-DOT-COM.

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