Saturday, September 20, 2008

Revised Leads 4

Forty passengers were evacuated from Northwest Airlines flight 428 at the Municipal Airport in LaCrosse, Wisc., following a flight from Minneapolis, when a landing tower employee spotted smoke near the wheels.


A 7-year-old missing boy was found in Brick Township, N.J., when a neighbor called police after seeing his picture on the movie, "Adam: The Song Continues".
The boy's mother, Ellen Lynn Conner, 27, was arrested and now faces charges of kidnapping and interference with a custody warrant.

1 comment:

camccune said...

Better! Just include the "when" in both leads.

8+1=9/10